This year I have learnt to use preposition start
Eg:
Between Miss Garton’s rage with the class, and Nova’s disappearance it is like the world might end.
Before then, everyone was at peace and lived in harmony. Beyond the mountains up north lived the friendly peacemakers of New Zealand. Creatures with such power and strength that those who have heard of them refer to them as the gods of aotearoa.

This is my write that easy stats:

I feel like I am getting better and felt that it is alot harder to write a story with instructions on how to write most of your sentences in your story.

What do you think I need to work on next?

Kia ora! My name is Oscar and I am a year 7 that goes to school in the Horowhenua district. I like to play quite a wide range of sports such as basketball, water polo, soccer and rugby. Next to this, I also like to play some less physical sports like chess. My favourite school subject is definitely math but I really want to learn more about woodwork and machinery. When I get older I would like to change the world through the digital.